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First Round Poem

I'm not sure I'm doing this correctly, but here goes. I wrote this poem after a trip to the Milwaukee Art Museum. Don't know whether to include an image of the painting.


After "Ocean Park #68" by Richard Diebenkorn (1974)

Lights hum and rise

Doors unlock and open

A high-heeled boot pokes in

Slaps on the shiny floor


Pairs of whispering ladies

In richly-colored finery

Lean in close

Gloved hands on cloaked forearms


Solitary dark-suited stick men

Stand back, stride forward

Bend to examine details

Hands clasp behind their backs


Children on a field trip scatter

Dart, skip, lunge, side-step

A boy yanks another’s elbow

He protests, But I like this one


A woman hobbles to a smooth bench

Plops down, inhales, sighs

She straightens and grimaces

Shifts and settles


Eyes dance on the walls

She swivels

Her wandering gaze slows

And flows over me


Down my choppy edge of

Coal-dark slate, smoky silver-gray

Morning glory, cornflower

Tiffany blue, verdigris


Across my bottom edge

Ultramarine, robin egg blue

Hummingbird, luna moth

Sea green, turquoise


Up my warm edge

Chestnut, terra cotta

Cinnamon stick, wildflower honey

Saffron, curry


Along my top edge

Creamy white, rosy tan

Granite, sand, magnolia

Flesh of grapefruit and salmon


The woman rises, flooding forward

Slides right, glides left, stops

Wrinkles her nose

Peers at a ruddy paint stroke


Her eyes sail over thin lines

East, south, west, north

Stopping where diagonals meet

Scanning angles and vertices


Her eyes open wider

Their lights hum and rise

Her eyebrows arch

Her lips purse


Sailing closer, nearly touching me

Squinting, her eyes focus

Her hand rises, her finger waves

Pointing to the ruddy spot


Ebbing slowly, just a step or two

Ocean of green and blue

Golden sun, yellow lights

Sandy shore, distant dark hills


Surfing in close again

Face glowing, peaceful and calm

She warbles softly

I see you, little red beach house


Museum label now in view

“Ocean Park #68”

Richard Diebenkorn

1974

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https://diebenkorn.org/objects/488

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